Miss Xtraordinary

Do I know you?

I see you in the corner,

Then our eyes meet.

And even by your look,

I can tell you're really sweet.

But I don't know you...


And so we talked,

I'm a bit afraid.

But this time I promise,

I won't be betrayed.

But I like you...


You confessed you feelings for me,

I kind of like you too.

I may regret this later on,

Still I know it's true.

But I really do like you...


How can I tell you,

I love you more than my life?

Now I know for sure,

You won't stab me with a knife.

But I love you...


You said you love me,

I don't think it's true.

You had strike one,

Don't make strike two.

But I suspect you...


You lost my trust,

I don't believe you anymore.

If you don't change,

I'll go out the door.

But I don't trust you...


And so I did,

I left you alone.

You cheated on me,

I won't answer my phone.

But I hate you...


I see you in corner,

Then our eyes meet.

I'm not afraid,

It's you I'll defeat.

But I don't know you...

And I never will.


-Miss Xtraordinary



    Thanks "X" for a very experiential poem on the Ecstasy and Agony of LOVE ! In my experience Love does not always run smooth and I too have had my share of UPS & DOWNS ! However my philosophy is "Better to have Loved & Lost ~ than never to have Loved at all !" Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

  • Louis Gibbs

    A well expressed lesson ... we learn from our experiences. Why else would we be here? Good poem, Miss X!

  • FredPeyer

    Ahh, the happiness and agony of love. You expressed this roller-coaster of the heart really well.

  • Miss Xtraordinary

    Thank you all for these comments! :)

  • niallprideaux

    Loved every single piece of this x

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good write. Love has its ups and downs but when trust is destroyed it is almost impossible to get back. I am glad that you have moved on, the one for you is out there somewhere.

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