I love you more than the flowers,
I love you more than the sky
I love you more than a sunny day
I love you more than a bird flying by
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Malu (Pseudonym) (
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Expressing LOVE through POETRY ~ MALU ~ is in infinite task and I love the analogies you have chosen in this elegant quatrain ! MORE THAN ~ Flowers ~ Sky ~ Sunny Day ~ Bird flight ! I'm in love and that is my experience too ! Thanks for caring ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my DEVELOPING FUSION on Animals ~ Yours B
Wow! Thank you. A long response for a short poem.
you hit the nail right on the head!
what can I say but
I love you more
I feel the love and I love you back. I always say that love has no restrictions. Just love.
peace be with you
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Malu, what can be nicer than a bird flying by, carrying our love on its wings!
I want to be under those wings because for me we should just be a huge family on one same bucket all mixed and full of love. Thank you.
Yes, we can conquer the moon but what we really are looking for is just simple love. Thanks for your sweet comments.
I hope it's reciprocal M. I think I've only known One Lover like that throughout my entire lifetime.
Thanks for your comments. They say you don't look for love but you open a window to love to enter. I have my windows and doors all open and I think it works. When love begins to fade I walk up and love even more.
Love in the air. I can feel it.
Thanks Augustus. Love is always in the air here. Not exclusive love though. The way I love is very easy. It is like; I don't love the war, but I love the families affected by it. I don't love the storm but I love the limbs of the trees that was torn apart. I love the flowers and also the weeds. And I love all that is Gods creation. So, this is my easy way of love. Plus, I like to imagine being in love.
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