I love you

malubotelho

I love you more than the flowers,
I love you more than the sky
I love you more than a sunny day
I love you more than a bird flying by

  • Author: Malu (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 27th, 2017 14:57
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 25
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Expressing LOVE through POETRY ~ MALU ~ is in infinite task and I love the analogies you have chosen in this elegant quatrain ! MORE THAN ~ Flowers ~ Sky ~ Sunny Day ~ Bird flight ! I'm in love and that is my experience too ! Thanks for caring ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my DEVELOPING FUSION on Animals ~ Yours B

  • malubotelho

    Wow! Thank you. A long response for a short poem.

  • onepauly

    you hit the nail right on the head!
    what can I say but
    I love you more

    • malubotelho

      I feel the love and I love you back. I always say that love has no restrictions. Just love.

      • onepauly

        peace be with you

        • malubotelho

          Amen.

        • FredPeyer

          Malu, what can be nicer than a bird flying by, carrying our love on its wings!

          • malubotelho

            I want to be under those wings because for me we should just be a huge family on one same bucket all mixed and full of love. Thank you.

          • malubotelho

            Yes, we can conquer the moon but what we really are looking for is just simple love. Thanks for your sweet comments.

          • Gary Edward Geraci

            I hope it's reciprocal M. I think I've only known One Lover like that throughout my entire lifetime.

            • malubotelho

              Thanks for your comments. They say you don't look for love but you open a window to love to enter. I have my windows and doors all open and I think it works. When love begins to fade I walk up and love even more.

            • Augustus

              Love in the air. I can feel it.

              • malubotelho

                Thanks Augustus. Love is always in the air here. Not exclusive love though. The way I love is very easy. It is like; I don't love the war, but I love the families affected by it. I don't love the storm but I love the limbs of the trees that was torn apart. I love the flowers and also the weeds. And I love all that is Gods creation. So, this is my easy way of love. Plus, I like to imagine being in love.



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