Fat

Renzi

She wants to eat

But doesn't want to feel fat

And she will

If she eats that

  • Author: Renzi Mars (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 29th, 2017 03:38
  • Comment from author about the poem: Eating can be bloody hard. Fat can be and IS an agonizing feeling after a meal or a snack. The body craves it ( my body ) but my illness rejects it with over powering feelings of fear. I must fight the fear. I do. Some days, like a warrior. Today i guess i'm just a worrier.
  • Category: Short story
  • Views: 35
  • Users favorite of this poem: burning-embers, brianna jean zeiger
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  • Goldfinch60

    Good strong write, you have the strength and fortitude to stay a warrior.

    • Renzi

      A warrior not a worrier *goals* ❤

    • Christina8

      I am sorry you struggle so hard with this. Society has us all fitting in a perfect model size, whatever that is these days. I pray someday you will feel comfortable in your own body.

      • Renzi

        Thankyou so much Christina, i really appreciate your kindness 💓

      • FredPeyer

        Renzi, how you can say something important so beautifully and clearly in four short lines that would take others four pages is totally amazing.

        • Renzi

          Thankyou lovely 💓 Short and sharp eh. Just a wee thought always in my head.

          • FredPeyer

            Don't know you well, but appreciate your "wee thoughts"!

            • Renzi

              Awh thankyou Alfred, it's good to be appreciated 🙂

            • Renzi

              Your comments mean the world ln this tough day guys, thankyou so much xo

            • Louis Gibbs

              Another fine short poem, Renzi. The hits keep coming! I admire your spirit.

              • Renzi

                Thankyou lovely 💓

              • burning-embers

                OK so i'm full of sympathy for your burden (ha-wot use sympathy to you ya warrior?) but this to a fat b tard like me also has a really funny side esp beneath that brill pic - does the pic come with the poem when i add to fav's? Going to fnd out.

                • Renzi

                  Did it did it did it save? All your wee comments i woke up to and lovely support was absolutely heart warming 💓 Thankyou so much you lovely little human 😊

                  • burning-embers

                    Yes thank you the pic came with the fat verse and it makes me laugh every time i look at it..... esp the last FAT in caps.



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