Out of luck


I'm lost on what day is it and now im losing my way.
I can't discribe how i feel so I'm  just going to deal with it until it's seal.
I thought im better, but i think im more bitter.
My mind is like a dime thats not worth enough to spare.
My tears are on going no one hears me.
I'm  stuck im out of luck

  Jessa T Agustin

  Thursday at 11pm (PT)

  June 29, 2017.


  • Author: Jezzer (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 30th, 2017 01:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: Its about how you feel towards the world and what could you do to do better.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 30
  • User favorite of this poem: sr2017.


  • FredPeyer

    Well written Jessa. And you will never be stuck, and never be out of luck, BECAUSE you are a writer! And a good one at that!

    • Jezzer

      Thank you fredpeyer! Thats means alot. I want to put my poems out there and publish someday. I try my best to write and doing my best at things.



      WELCOME TO MPS JESSA ~ Thanks for your first Poem which really tells how it is ~ also how many of us feel ! BITTER not BETTER ~ STUCK out of LUCK ! However I always say "Tomorrow is a new day" and at least i wake up OPTIMISTIC ! Thinking of You ~ Every Blessing ~ Hugs BRIAN (UK)

      • Jezzer

        Hi! Thank you! Your very kind and welcoming.

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