My demon. My companion.

Renzi

Ana my demon
Mia my foe
Anxiety high
Full of woe

There's nothing more I'd want than to be free,

But how can I escape when it's myself, its me!

Ana my companion
Mia my friend
Together forever
Until the end.

  • Author: Renzi Mars (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 1st, 2017 05:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: Gahhh!! My mind!!!! The never ending battle! I just penned down that exact war!!!! ( Ana - anorexia) (Mia - bulimia) ahh they've even names!!
  • Category: Short story
  • Views: 55
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  • Louis Gibbs

    Stunningly beautiful poem, Renzi! You continue to amaze and impress me.

    • Renzi

      Thanks so much louis 💓

    • FredPeyer

      Renzi, if only you could master that demon as well as you master writing you would be free already! And who painted that watercolor? It is incredible! A perfect visual expression of your poem.

      • Renzi

        I really wish i could. One day eh!!! I'm unsure of the artists name eek, but when i saw it , it just interconnected with my feelings, i had to use it. Its a great piece.

      • Christina8

        So well written. The painting that accompanies this poem does it justice. I agree that you are a very brave woman! Great poem!

        • Renzi

          Thankyou my lovely 💓

        • Augustus

          Thanks for the author's note. Great write. Tough diseases. Don't allow you to see who you really are.

          • Renzi

            The great Augustus, i've sensed so much love on this site for you. Thankyou for reading my poem 🙂

          • Heather T

            You are such a bit of joy. I'm so full of hope for you! Keep writing and fighting.

            • Renzi

              I'm trying HT, the only way is up right? ❤

            • mbird72

              Wo I can feel the anxiety

              • Renzi

                💓

              • malubotelho

                You are a little darling. Full of courage. I think it was St. Augustine that said that everything brought to the light, becomes light. You are bringing your problems out. Shining light into it and recognizing it is a great way of dealing with it. A brave girl and excellent writer.

                • Renzi

                  Thankyou so much for taking the to read, and for your lovely kind words 🙂 One day, one day there has to be freedom in the light 💓

                  • malubotelho

                    Welcome dear

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Very good write. Your strength shines through these words may that strength keep you moving forward to the wellness of your being.

                    • Renzi

                      May this stuggle be my strength.. that believe is imprinted in my crazy wee brain.

                    • Renzi

                      Thankyou all for such kind heart warning comments ❤



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