For the sake of ourselves

malubotelho

Sometimes I think poems are revelations
It is like our fingers or pens are dripping out with our feelings, concerns, emotions, regrets, desires, joys, fears and so on.
Our blood are being used as ink, transferring to the paper, colors of our lives.
Little by little we begin to loose ourselves, confessing to the world through our bleeding heart, looking for approval, for scape, for attention, but, for more than that, I would say inclusion.
We get real pain and create beauty,
We suffer for real and we pleasure for nothing. We twist our thoughts to create rhymes, we see what others ignore, we catch words from the wind, we drop our feelings to the world, for the sake of our on story.

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  • Hopey_xx

    And that is why we write! I like this very much 🙂

    • malubotelho

      Thanks for reading. Yes, we will keep writing our sufferings and our glories.

    • burning-embers

      Poetry is my confession, my revelation, my despair - my tears and laughter, my release, my repair - my joy and my sorrow, my trouble and strife - it pours from my fingers its the ink of my life.

      • malubotelho

        Lovely and truthful comment. You really related to my writing today. I think we've found the best community to reveal ourselves. I'm free. Thanks for reading

      • FredPeyer

        Malu, this is the most poetic, most eloquent, most beautiful, and most truthful description of what makes a writer I ever read. Great!

        • malubotelho

          Thanks Fred. Your comment flatters me. I'm happy that you like it.

        • Augustus

          I am completely with you on this theme. Great job.

        • malubotelho

          Thank you friend, yes

        • onepauly

          revelation, most of the time that's what poets feel.

        • malubotelho

          Yes, thank you. This is a great word to define this. Revelation.

        • Goldfinch60

          Good write and very true for many of us.

        • Renzi

          Bam! The complete truth. Amazing💓



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