why do i suffer internal pain
all i want is to mutually gain
independence from the emotional strain
it is to care less for more
and what could be in store
for your initial commitments
to be free from feeling gutsatosis
where only could be felt a neurosis
scary scary boy what a fairy
why then why these sensations
they surely have their own durations
to be smacked you will not crack
for you know you got the knack
your emotions are yours
you could open more inner doors
to grow you must release the spores
do not let them clutch or clingand with your true self you will bring
pleasant things that will come to pass
you dont have to walk with mass
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Author:
onepauly (
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Paul, a very emotionally charged poem. I do like it, well written. In your last line are you using "mass" instead of "masses"? Is your meaning at the end of the poem that we should follow our own light and not fall in with the others? At least that's how I understood it.
easy enough, mass means huge, and big men don't have the problem that us other men have to deal with when encountering jerks. they are out there. other men think differently if the man is big.
maybe this poem comes from paranoia. I'm learning my friend.
Pleasant things WILL come to pass. Good positive write.
thank you. I was beginning to wonder. I reread it and I'm satisfied that its a poem of great meaning.
its ok for others if they understand it the way I do. I'm keeping in touch with escaping lifes prison.
peace be with you.
Beautiful writing Pauly. Thanks for sharing
thank you for sharing your comment
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