I wish

just a girl.

I wish you knew. 

I wish you knew I cry myself to sleep, 

I wish you knew how I slit my wrists and smile,

I wish you knew how empty I feel on the inside, 

I wish you knew my everyday pain,

I wish you knew all the promises he didn't keep,

I wish you knew how deep I actually am,

I wish you knew the pile of sadness I have,

I wish you knew how much I appreciate you came,

I wish you knew the leap your taking by dating me, 

but you won't, you won't ever. 

  • Author: just a girl. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 4th, 2017 11:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem is a little deeper then the last one.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 28
  • User favorite of this poem: kendra_dawnn.
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Comments3

  • kendra_dawnn

    I honestly love this.. I can really relate to it and it shows that you are brave enough to express how you actually feel. When I was in a deep stage of depression, there was no way I could have mustered up the courage to do that!

    • just a girl.

      Thank you so much! It just warms my heart to know that someone can relate there self to this!

      • kendra_dawnn

        I hope you continue to write on a basis like this. Like you said, it does help to know that there are others out there who feel the same, and you never know. Maybe we can help each other, in some cases. <3

        • 3 more comments

      • Krystal Brewington

        Really liked this. Good job on the writing. I felt your pain while reading this. Hope to read more by you

        • just a girl.

          Thank you! I really appreciate it!

        • FredPeyer

          Well written poem. I like how you use the repetition of "I wish you knew" to hammer away at the point. Very well written, very emotional, very personal.



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