Stephanie Showers

Lowly

 

Copyright ©2017 Stephanie R Schubert

 

 

Engaged

In a lie

Trapped

In sadness

Destined

To be lonely

Destined

to be heartbroken

Restless

I carry on

Awaiting the day

That you are gone

Off again

to a new adventure

That is not

happily ever after

 

Comments6

  • Tony36

    Well written and expressed

  • lostgirl24

    Really well written and the emotion is beautiful. (And I totally relate to this)

  • Candlewitch

    agony personified! great work!

    *hugs, Cat

  • Stephen.Sapaugh

    Iambic diameter done in a really well way. I am glad that you were able to pull this off.I personally have a hard time being so short with what I want to say in so little words. Usually I would talk about the lack of punctuation in a poem, however this one doesn't need any. If it had punctuation it would ruin what you have here. I am glad you wrote it, and can relate when I feel in a lowly state. If I were to grade this poem I would give it a 8/10. I invite you to come and look at my poem(s), and tell me what you think of them. I always invite critiques.

  • FredPeyer

    You say a lot with few well chosen words arranged in a beautiful way.
    Mahalo, would love to read more from you.

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write.



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