NO WAY can I call you

NO WAy can I fall into your arms

NO Way can I ever trust you again

NO way can I forget you

No way can I shut you out of my mind

no way can I keep you out of my daily thoughts

no way can i ever be your friend

no way can i ever stop mourning that loss

no way can i turn back time

no way can i just fast forward


no way out and no way in

no way to escape revolving Thoughts

no way to accept Loves end

  • Author: Laurel L (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 5th, 2017 12:55
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 62


  • AmandaJade

    I love how you changed the capitalization of "no way" throughout the poem, very creative. Nice work!

  • Stephen.Sapaugh

    This poem is utter madness ebbing and flowing together. I know you are writing it to get through some of your emotions, and I am truly grateful that you are. I hope that you feel better after writing this, and it makes me very interested in your own works. Normally I would grade this poem, but as it seems to be really emotionally charged I'll just leave you with that I am happy you wrote it.

  • FredPeyer

    Agree with Amanda, the changing capitalization is intriguing. Also like the way your repetition of "no way" re-inforces the statements that follow. Good writing, good poem! Thanks.

  • Renzi

    Very intriguing, A very emotional yet assertive poem. 💓

  • burning-embers

    Great write. Reads like you are cleansing yourself of this betrayer. Conveys hurt and anger and STRENGTH.


    WELCOME TO MPS LAURELL ~ Thank you for sharing your very first poem ! The STRUCTURE of you poem is very vibrant and dynamic with each line commencing with and emphasising the title ~ NO WAY ~ Awesome Structure we all got the Message ~ the AGONY of the ENDING of a VERY SPECIAL LOVE. This is a SAD LOVE SONNET and each of the 14 lines highlights an important facet of your love that you have lost ~ and the fact that there is NO WAY BACK and NO WAY you can retrieve or recover and aspect of your Love ~ NO WAY ! I it so so sad I was crying for you by the final line. It happens to Men and I am old enough (33) to have experienced both the ECSTASY & AGONY of LOVE. I have survived but the pain is eternal ! So I can empathise with you ! Thinking of you Praying for you ~ Your MPS Friend & Fellow Poet ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B

  • Laurell

    Thank you to all that commented. I was compelled to share this poem because it was too much to keep secret. It is great to have an outlet.

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