How can you know when you found love again
When does it change from just your friend
Is it the feeling that everything is happy and content
Maybe it's that person who is so hard to forget
Somehow seemed to change without a notice
When everything but her is so hard to focus.
Sometimes you feel you can hardly catch breath
Then you talk and feel it beneath the flesh
Try so hard to be calm in an unfamiliar way
So different from just the other day
Finally you realize this feelings so true
The next time you talk, you say I Love You
Just thinking once you were just my friend
I think I know, I have found love again
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Author:
Lanejamesc (
Offline) - Published: July 5th, 2017 18:46
- Category: Love
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Due to the content matter of this poem I won't be giving it a regular review. I like that that you are working through the deep seeded emotion of love that resides in all of us. It was once M.F.K Fisher that said about writing why she writes about food so much ," That there are only two things we can't live without food, and love." This reminds he of that. Glad you were able to deal with the emotions, and I hope you have found love like you have described, because without it we can easily perish.
Thanks I think, but I was not asking for your review.
why dont you go screw your review bollotics. can't you perceive how you confuse and upset people? sorry for this post-Lanejamesc. you don't deserve it.
Reads like you were thinking out loud and came to a right conclusion. When this is happening to you, you just know don't you. Even if a painful past makes u fight it. A delightful read.
Thank you, kind words
Amazing how that can happen, isn't it? I like your fine poem, Lane!
Yes it is, thank
Good write, may your love abound in your life.
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