To be lost is fine,
Need not the expectation.
To feel, is no crime.
Alleviation.
Reverberate in the mind,
To feel, is no crime.
To be lost is fine,
Need not the expectation.
To feel, is no crime.
Alleviation.
Reverberate in the mind,
To feel, is no crime.
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Wow...great write
Thanks Jeff, much appreciated.
"To be lost is fine," I like that, lost is just another word for being free. Nice poem, I enjoyed the read!
I enjoyed the comment. Thank you very much, and I'm glad you liked it.
ahh,
it is a difficult question: how much to show the world of our feelings? a double edged sword! I enjoyed this much! made me think...
*hugs, Cat
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Good write, so much said in so few words.
Thanks, I appreciate the comment!
Nice job, definitely felt this one. Simple but powerfully affective, like Ripples it will do more than you think 😉
Thanks man, much appreciated!
A wise person told me that to feel isn't a crime... I loved the reminder. I have always worn my heart on my sleeves and that has made me seld conscious about feeling too much. This was a reminder that feeling is good. It shows your depth! Good wite!
Thank you kindly sir. A wise man indeed. Emotion isn't a crime, and it never will be. Stick around!
I'm actually a woman. But you're very welcome!
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