Fluid, graceful existence
You delightful mysterious faze of creation
Neon bogey body floating in the dark
How you enchant with your dancing in the deep
Gorgeously swaying with the flow of the ocean
Warping space as you move along
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Author:
Leya Virago (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: July 7th, 2017 09:23
- Comment from author about the poem: MY favorite animal is a Jellyfish. Thought I'd write about it! :)
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Beautiful imagery here, virago! A well written poem, indeed.
Thanks L.G.!
stunning creature but can also turn deadly sometime when you swim in the wrong waters. love this.
Yeah I love the power that they hold in such a graceful form
Virago your description of a jellyfish is so poetic and true. They are beautiful creatures. But living where I do, they are also to be avoided. Got stung a few times, meat tenderizer seems to help with the burning sensation created. But it's their ocean, not mine.
Yeah I've always admired them. I love watching the creatures of the deep series from BBC. I know there are some dangerous jellies out there!! What a funny story to be able to tell though! And yes we are just visitors in their domain.
Good write, they are amazing creatures.
Thanks very much!
Title caught my eye first time I've read one of your poems ,very good nice imagery and very poetic...
Well thanks for giving me a shot! I appreciate your input. I was trying to express how mesmerizing jellyfish are to me. I could sit and stare at them for hours. Not sure why.... HAHA! I'm always open to critique if you ever have any for me.
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