Why won’t you notice me? Invisibility is one of my many strengths when your around... never seen or heard, never paid attention to at all... I’m simply invisible to your sight... I want you to see me for who I really am... I want to get to know you like the back of my hand... but you can’t get to know a person who doesn’t even know you exist... my presence goes unnoticed upon you... I just keep hoping and hoping for your attention... a glance or something... I just want your attention... when I see you my inside get all bubbly and I can’t help but smile... the only thing that hurts is that you don’t feel the same way you just walk right past me every time without a word... my heart feels like it’s being ripped out of my chest and my breath shortens... what is it going to take for you to notice me! I am I really that invisible.....
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Author:
Lost Girl (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wish he just noticed me like I noticed him, please comment your thoughts and opinions please.
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Damn really made feel emotion. Great job!
Thank you!
A very well written cry for help. One-way street love is hard, but believe me, one day somebody will notice you. And you will notice him/her. And from then on your life will be so much better.
I really appreciate your enthusiasm and encouragement
STILL LOST SWEETHEART ? I love CHICAGO GIRLS (like Michelle Obama) and I can't see why HE (MEN are so crass) sees you as MISS CELLOPHANE an looks right through you ! Your Poem as usual is well structured and well expressed ! I promise if you sashied past me I WOULD notice ~ and you would KNOW (and feel) I'd NOTICED ~ YES ! Hugs BRIAN (UK) Note that Boys can be MISTER CELLOPHANE as well ~ B
Thank you Brian and thank you for making me smile!
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