Im human

i can get hurts from words

im just a girl

not a rock you can just throw

i have issues, just as you

i have feelings, just as you

i have a heart, that beats

just as you

but you don't act like it

you act as if you're better

you act as if you're a pure goddess

but you're not

you're a human, just like me

you breathe the same air i do

you walk where i do

but you yet you still think you're better

if you're so great then why are you in my earth

why aren't you in the sky?

why aren't you above us?

why aren't you controlling the world just like you act as if you

oh wait, its because you're human too

and you're not any better from the rest of us


  • Godisreal

    I agree darling...

  • FredPeyer

    Welcome to the forum Sarah.
    I like this well written poem, it is so honest. Yes, some people seem to think that they are better than others, if they are, why cant't they walk on water?
    If everybody would be thinking like you, we would have a lot less problems in this world.
    Great poem! Thank you for sharing.


    Get it out there, Girl...well done...that is a common issue these days with NOT only females but also with many in the gay community....nobody is better...if we all would just live and let live, love and let love, we would appear as one big God/Goddess to the outside world or what have you....keep writing...take care

  • Trev

    I liked the flow and the emotion in this.. Good job.

  • billybob



    WELCOME SARAH ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent in structure and a challenging subject BETTERNESS ! In God's sight we are all gifted and we all have self worth. Because you are a WOMAN ~ you are much better than ME and the other 3.7 billion MEN on the Planet ! Also ~ judging by your positive attitude ~ You are probably better than most Females as well ! Hugs ~ BRIAN

  • onepauly

    only better is better
    great poem. positivaly

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