Im human
i can get hurts from words
im just a girl
not a rock you can just throw
i have issues, just as you
i have feelings, just as you
i have a heart, that beats
just as you
but you don't act like it
you act as if you're better
you act as if you're a pure goddess
but you're not
you're a human, just like me
you breathe the same air i do
you walk where i do
but you yet you still think you're better
if you're so great then why are you in my earth
why aren't you in the sky?
why aren't you above us?
why aren't you controlling the world just like you act as if you
oh wait, its because you're human too
and you're not any better from the rest of us
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Author:
sarahgerome (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this is a message for those who think you're better. you're not
- Category: Sad
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- Users favorite of this poem: GODisreal, sarahgerome.
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Comments7
I agree darling...
thanks so much!
Welcome to the forum Sarah.
I like this well written poem, it is so honest. Yes, some people seem to think that they are better than others, if they are, why cant't they walk on water?
If everybody would be thinking like you, we would have a lot less problems in this world.
Great poem! Thank you for sharing.
thank you!
Get it out there, Girl...well done...that is a common issue these days with NOT only females but also with many in the gay community....nobody is better...if we all would just live and let live, love and let love, we would appear as one big God/Goddess to the outside world or what have you....keep writing...take care
thank you. bless
I liked the flow and the emotion in this.. Good job.
all love! x
Exquisite❤️
WELCOME SARAH ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent in structure and a challenging subject BETTERNESS ! In God's sight we are all gifted and we all have self worth. Because you are a WOMAN ~ you are much better than ME and the other 3.7 billion MEN on the Planet ! Also ~ judging by your positive attitude ~ You are probably better than most Females as well ! Hugs ~ BRIAN
only better is better
great poem. positivaly
thank youuu!
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