Do words and thoughts make things true?
What if I told you unicorns fart rainbows in the sky.
That every time you blink a leprechaun dies
Would you believe me
What if I told you that someone flys about giving toys for free
That money makes the world go round and doesn't grow on trees
Would you believe me
What if I told you when I look in the mirror that's not me
Then have to run to the toilet for the truth that I feel
What if I told you to stop but you thought it was a game
Then tell you to get over it! don't be so dramatic, that's just way life is
Would you believe me
What if I told you, that words are no lie
Your thoughts can build or destroy
From my prospective everything that's felt is truth, so be careful what you think, say or do.
I've found that words are stronger than sticks or stones, with everyones guidance I'm finding my flow.
I only wish I knew this back in the day
But it's never too late to change your ways.
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Poetic Dan (
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Very thought provoking... Beautifully written!
I'm glad to do the right kind of provoking.
Thank you for your kind words
Words and thought may not make things true, but they make them happen. And rainbows do appear when unicorns fart, I heard it from a reliable, but unfortunately secret source! And Poetic Dan, what if I don't want to change my ways? Would you still believe ME?
Sorry, it is getting late here and I had a long day, but I really enjoyed your poem!
Hahhahaha buddy that was a fantastic comment, thank you for my morning chuckle. Secret source I'm still laughing, I hope you have fantastic day.
You can be any way you want my friend 😉
Indeed. Change is a recourse that is never too late to be obtained. The mind can definitely bring about many things unseen to the human eye.
Now that I like that train of thought, what ever it is! It, is strong with you 😉
I'm a jedi bro, haha!
Good write, we can always change our ways.
Thank you for reading, I'm enjoying my change.
Will never be able to see a rainbow the same again. Light but serious. Thanks. Sending positive thoughts.
Thank you, yes in my mind there is that serious point. Glad you mentioned it 😉
O and that I've now changed his you see them too
I believe you.
Sweet! many wouldn't lucky we are open minded round here 😉
i would believe you !
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