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  FredPeyer July 11th, 2017 02:06

  Paul I hate to admit it, but this time you lost me half way into your poem. Could use some help!

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    onepaulyJuly 11th, 2017 03:01

    I let each reader use his own opinion. this is not a government document.
    this is poetry. and i'll say that most of the others poems I read I can get neither hide nor hair out of them. peace be with you.

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    FredPeyerJuly 11th, 2017 03:08

    Pauly, it this would be a government document, I would have to read it about ten times just to understand the gist of it. Believe me I know, I deal with Department of Health Regulations every day.
    But getting back to your poem: Give me at least a hint!!!!

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  kevin browne July 11th, 2017 02:26

  yes, still trying to work this one out slightly. I get your vision of getting up, out and about in the tour of life. apart from that understanding I fell short at the end.

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    onepaulyJuly 11th, 2017 03:15

    this is what that little voice in my head suggests that I write. so I write it. sometimes I'm confused as you or anybody else about the outcome. I'm not the only poet to write something that others cant understand. you have to read it and make your own judgement. in fact there are lots and lots of poems that I read from others that I cannot make any sense out of. I could explain and explain until hell freezes over and theirs always someone who wont be satisfied.

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    kevin browneJuly 11th, 2017 03:24

    yep, that's very true but it shouldn't put us off the idea of writing. It appears you and I have similar effects whilst we are writing. my mind flows like the ink from a pen when it comes to thoughts and transferring them onto paper as such. I write a poem and hardly ever repair what's been written. write it and leave it is my thinking unless it's too obvious to leave in. none-the-less, we still need read the undertones of our poetry in order to understand it.

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  Nicholas Browning July 11th, 2017 03:56

  I believe this is a message stating that someone goes on a journey in order to see things for what they are, in turn resulting in their abundant fuel for their craft. Well said.

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  P.H.Rose July 11th, 2017 07:35

  What I get is you are
  Talking about another
  Person, maybe a loved one
  I actually like it pauly as it
  Makes you think, read it
  A cpl of times and see
  Something different..
  It's a great play with words.
  And also it has created
  Good conversation between
  Us..... but you are so right
  About putting down what
  Comes into your head..
  I read some of my stuff
  I've not published and to
  Be honest it's alien speak !!

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    onepaulyJuly 11th, 2017 15:56

    I AM FEELING HAPPY TODAY. THANKS FOR YOUR OPINION.

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  malubotelho July 11th, 2017 15:12

  I understood that it is a travel between you and your soul. It seems a pleasant trip that brings good news. Good news is the kind of news I want to see. Thank you.

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    onepaulyJuly 11th, 2017 16:01

    I've been thinking about it all day thanks.

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    malubotelhoJuly 11th, 2017 16:10

    Welcome.

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  Goldfinch60 July 12th, 2017 00:12

  The way I read it is to travel with your soul or it may be just you soul travelling and leading yourself into a better world. Though provoking write. Paul.

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    onepaulyJuly 12th, 2017 00:47

    hello, there is something about it. you got to take the words, don't have to be all at once . and sink deep, away from distractions, keep thinking about the words as you let them go deep, the words then transform into feelings. like attracts like in the realm of the mind. thoughts will attract other thoughts of the same nature. follow the ones that feel comfortable. this is what I do. not you. this is just the way I do it. hope you liked that true story. onepauly