P.H.Rose

Bends In My Road....

           Bends on my road..

 

My road bends sharp, a bit further yonder,
I cannot see, what's laid there beyond.
All I can do is make my footfall a little stronger,
Until I reach the bend, and it's there I'll know what to do.
Both rain and wind have slowed down my walk,
But when the sun shines it's brightness,
      I feel life flows on through.

Comments7

  • Fay Slimm.

    Rain or no the poem has form and style to show imagery at its best P.H.

    • P.H.Rose

      Thank you Fay

    • ShannonXx

      A great poem and the weather has been horrible at the moment!

      • P.H.Rose

        Thank you Shannon
        Hasn't it just....
        Bloody horrible!!!

      • onepauly

        theirs a storm outside right now
        with all the thunder and lightning.

        • P.H.Rose

          Just a bit of rain pauly
          Wrote another one as I sat
          There..

          • onepauly

            I'm okay your okay

          • Nicholas Browning

            A nice little tribute to the winding paths of life. Good stuff.

            • P.H.Rose

              Thank you Nicholas
              You got it spot on.
              Thank you

            • malubotelho

              I was reading your poem and came to my mind something I wrote and posted on Instagram to go with a picture. It is just a saying about a bend on a road. I never been to England but I lived in Australia for 3 years. Does it have anything related. The English there is a bit different than here in US.

              • P.H.Rose

                Yes malu we have some
                Beautiful winding roads
                Especially in the countryside
                We're not so far apart with
                Our English ha ha

              • malubotelho

                Thanks for your great poem. Loved to read it.

                • P.H.Rose

                  Thank you malu

                • Goldfinch60

                  Good write. Those bends in life's roads need to be walked round as there are soe wonderful surprises around them.

                  • P.H.Rose

                    Thank you GF60
                    You are so right
                    Never know what's
                    Around the next bend
                    I think it's what makes
                    Life special....

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Very true PH.



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