Being anorexic makes it hard to see
All the good things that are in me
Depression makes it hard to smile
I’ve had it for a while
Suicide seems to be the way
to get my problems to go away
Insomnia makes it hard to sleep
So i just lay there and weep
My mind is a very bad place
It is just a void of dark space
My life is very sad
I only think of the bad memories I had
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Author:
EnderGirl (
Offline) - Published: July 12th, 2017 02:35
- Category: Sad
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Ohhhhhhhh FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ elegantly written ~ BUT ~This is such a sad sad Poem for one so Young ! SUICIDE ~ don't even mention it ~ just make the very best of what you have ~ YOU WILL SUCCEED ! Thinking of you Praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thanks Brian =)
Tell your troubles upon my screen
many heartaches are often seen
share your problems, bare your soul
youre amongst caring poets, one and all.
An excellent first poem here. Please let us see more.
I have to agree with Brian, make the best of what you have. On the same note, I must respectfully dissagree Brian. Sadness, anger, violence, and yes, even suicide are emotions and thoughts we've all dealt with at times. These things do not discriminate because of age. If you can think it, then you can say it. For myself I have found no better medicine than the creative process. Don't ever stop putting your thoughts into words, and 'mention, mention, mention!'. You write well, keep it up.☺
only a suggestion. if you want to sleep without the aid of drugs, try staying awake for 48 hours. then hit the hay.
Thanks Guys, I wrote this poem in my Language Arts/Literature class in 7th grade (i'm in 8th grade now) I just remember writing depressing poems and then my fren told me that they were actually good. So I desired to post my first poem on this website.
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