laughter echo's, or so the remembrance does;
my mind wanders through the empty hollows.
i watch from an external perspective,
reminiscing the lingering feeling of humanity.
it's in me, deep inside, i almost feel it.
reaching towards the shimmer that remains..
i grasp onto the hope and pull myself inward.
i remember.
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Author:
eldubbb (
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- Comment from author about the poem: We all experience phases of light and dark throughout life. Always remember.
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A fine, thought-provoking poem, el! Welcome to MPS, I think you will like your fellow poets here.
thank you much!
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem REMEMBRANCE ~ Which tells it like it really is. In retrospect all our experiences ~ of LIFE & LOVE ~ are a mixtur of ECSTASY and AGONY ! Sometimes alas it is mainly the AGONY we remember ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Do you live in Charlotte N Carolina ? Lovely State ~ Lovely City ~ B.
thank you, Brian!
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