Shooting Star

Adri

What an enigma you are
You run like a shooting star
Not worthy to break those walls
So resolute in your thoughts
Not ready to fall
Play the music ride the wave
Don't let it make you a slave

Can't hold you shooting star
What an enigma you are
Put a smile on that face
You could be so much more
It's not just a race
Let them see
your melody
Prove yourself to the world
Life experience will open your eyes
Your heart and your mind
Take a chance, don't be scared
Don't be blind
Be bare
By Adri Aviles 7/11/17

  • Author: Adri (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 12th, 2017 13:50
  • Comment from author about the poem: Some people build barriers that prevent them from experiencing all that life has to offer. All experiences whether good or bad teach us something and give us new perspectives in life.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 57
  • Users favorite of this poem: whisperingquill
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  • Louis Gibbs

    A fine first contribution to MPS! welcome to our family of poets, Adri.

    • Adri

      Thank you🦋

      • Nicholas Browning

        Agreed.

        • Adri

          Thanks Nicholas!🙂

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          WELCOME ADRI ~ Thanks you for your first poem ~ which throbs with positivity ! "Play the music ~ ride the wave" "Prove yourself to the World" "Take a chance ~ Don't be scared ~ Don't be blind ~ Be bare !" This is positive advice for People of all ages ! I also love the structure of the poem ~ it pulsates with rhyme & rhythm ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Love MIAMI a great City to live in ~ B.

          • Adri

            Thank you Brian! Such nice compliments. I've always loved poetry. I must admit that, I do not have much experience but I try. I will post another entirely different one tomorrow. Thanks again!

          • whisperingquill

            Nicely done poetess 🌹

            • Adri

              Thank u!!!!🦋

            • Poetic Dan

              So many great lines, beautifully said from the heart.
              Live the life you love
              Love the life you live

              • Adri

                😊 Thank u!!! My poems are amature I know but, sometimes simple is more!!! I just started writing so, there is room for improvement! I love that I will eventually get better! Practice makes perfect right!!!!

                • Adri

                  *amatuer sorry I can't stand iPads!!!

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Or permanent lol
                    There's no expert in anything, so there can be no amateur. From my view we're all just doing what we do, mine are simple as tbh I have to look up most peoples words 😉

                    • Poetic Dan

                      Hahaha see my brain read them both the same

                      • Adri

                        😜🤣🤣🤣 love it

                        • Adri

                          I like your pic it is very cool!!!

                          • Poetic Dan

                            Yeah it felt me the moment I saw it, I hold nothing back!

                          • FredPeyer

                            Well written with a great message. Love that last line "be bare", these two words say so much but are so hard to live up to. It takes a lot of courage to let others see you as you are. But are we not doing that on this site by sharing our poems?

                            • Adri

                              Yes, we are being bare here!!! Thank you for the compliments!!!🦋🦋🦋



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