Slap my wrist

Renzi

It's Saturday and look the booze is out again,
To miss my friends birthday would be a shame.

Of to Bangor, Bangor by the sea,
Where the bars are bouncing and the folk are merry.

Tomorrow i'll tell myself i'm never drinking again,
Well that's my mission until sunny Spain.

You heard it here, tomorrow is detox time,
Focus my health and make a daily rhyme.

If I break this promise please slap my wrist,
No really, feel free, I insist!!

  • Author: Renzi Mars (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 15th, 2017 08:41
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 43
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  • Louis Gibbs

    Raise a glass for me, Renzi! Have fun.

  • malubotelho

    Cute poem Renzi. Vacay time is like that. Have a good one. Happy birthday to your friend.

  • burning-embers

    'Didn't we have a lov-er-ly time the day we went to Bangor'
    WA-hey, holidays - who needs 'em - i do! Way to go Renzy!

  • Christina8

    It's good to have fun every once in a while! Hope you and your friend had fun. Great poem!

  • Heather T

    Take lots of vitamins, lol. My head aches just looking at the picture!

  • FredPeyer

    No wrist slapping from me Renzi, don't wanna spill your drink!
    But watch out, my tomorrow poem (which by the way I decided to publish long before I read yours) will be right down your alley.

  • Goldfinch60

    Cheers Renzi have (or hope you had) a great time.



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