It was one more day like many others
and the same old trivial sun showed a shore,
and like a sleazy lover,
with his cuddle warm embrace,
would seduce me once more.
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Author:
Malu (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was written original in Portuguese. Era só mais um dia , igual a tantos outros e o mesmo sol manjado aparecia e como um amante cafageste, no calor do seu abraço, outra vez me seduzia.
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Quite like the idea of a sleazy lover myself - could be something different - also like your poem m
Thanks Michael, sleazy is not that bad sometimes.
100% sleaze i couldn't go for. But sleaze within a knowing tender loving partnership for zest ... oh yes, yes pleazzzze a bit of sleaze.
Yes, because nobody is perfect, right? Thanks for reading.
I enjoyed this so much, and wish I could read the Portuguese!
Thank you. The Portuguese from Brazil is fun because I use two words that is like street language and the rhymes fits much better there. Happens that every time I try to translate a poem I end up writing another one. Thanks for reading
I like it Malu, reminds me of the days when we lie on the beach in the warm sand, with the heat of the sun enveloping us, the gentle rhythmic sound of the waves transporting us into some other dimension.
See what you did with your five lines? Now I wanna drop everything and drive that half hour to the north shore!
I'm happy you've got inspired by my simple words. Yes, hey, it is vacantion time. We are so luck we have the beach close by. When I was in Brazil we had to travel 1000 km to find the closest beach from where we lived. Now I always say that no one can complain because we live in paradise. Thanks for your comments
the take on the word sleaze has a whole new meaning to me now! This is wonderfully written!!
Thanks Domi. It is a fun write indeed. Thanks for your comment
and you seduce us with another slender piece of beautiful sexy poetry. thank you.
Thanks Kevin, sorry for the delay. I'm being too busy lately. This is just a cute short one.
i did wonder about you for a day or two but glad to see you're back onboard.
this one warmed me all over sometimes my emotions just pop up when I least expect them.
Wow! I'm happy that my write is creating emotions. Thank you
No, thank you.
Yes, I wrote this when at the beach on a lazy day.
Thanks for reading. Appreciate your comments.
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