In the misty waters
of my mind,
i reminisce of the hallowed,
memories that i left behind.
Once as vivid
as night and day
now only misty memories
slowly fading away
Fading away
like a gentle breeze
on a summers day
but it seems everything fades away
Even those
hallowed memories
of me and you
that we once knew...
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Author:
Ron parrish (Pseudonym) (
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Comments7
A very tender poem. While talking about fading memories, I also read it as a very tender declaration of love.
Great stuff!!!
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A great mixture of love, lost experiences, and -regret maybe? It is very lovely.
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I appreciate your poem and reply
you stamped this one down with a beauty that shone through the darkness. love the tenderness to it also.
i really appreciate your visit kevin
nice and even, your words
thank you for reading..
Beautiful write.
thank you very much my friend
A very nice poem. As we grow older the memories fade but hopefully love grows. Love the music and candle!
thank you
A beautiful love poem reminiscing in superb poetic rhyme. Gentle n n tender love sentiments. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again. Hope u will write your thoughts too about my latest poem, under it. I have been writing on other sites and they say they get fun and things from It.
thank you for the visit,i will certainly read you today
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