Music in my head

Poetic Dan

As I walk into the room hit with the sound.
My inner thoughts are calming down.

I begin to digest and dissecting each bit.
My body moves showing the rhythm that fits.

For this is where music takes my head.
That place my thoughts don't over do it.

To all the artists that spill their guts on a track.
Or the ones using just sounds of the heart.

You take me to place that nothing else can.
Now I've learnt a few chords, doing it myself.

My intention of this writing is to say the saying is right!
"When words fail, music talks" and if you let go, it will tell you what you want to know.

Mostly for me, to dance.
And just have fun.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 16th, 2017 02:33
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • onepauly

    song and dance man
    good poem.

    • Poetic Dan

      See you on the dance floor!

      • onepauly

        whole heartedly

        • Poetic Dan

          Haha! My daughter asked last night for me to learn "other side" on guitar, playing it now and I'll see you there my friend

          • onepauly

            I can feel the harmony in your music now. ha! ha! ha!

          • Goldfinch60

            Very true music can cure all ills and bring on all emotions. Good write.

            • Poetic Dan

              It is my medicen, as I play in the garden it has brought the birds to sit. The feeling no words can truly fit, I could use an Infinite amount and still not get it 😉
              Thanks for the comment buddy

            • kevin browne

              I will sing along with you my friend because your work is so cool.

              • Poetic Dan

                Well a duet that would soon be
                As the flow with good company
                The song would soon set us freeeeee

              • Fay Slimm.

                A flow of good rhythm in this excellent tribute to dancing for fun Dan - well done.

                • Poetic Dan

                  Thank you for the recognition of what's in my head lol

                • willyweed

                  you sing' you dance you touch the soul life is a cabaret my friend, nicely done! ww

                  • Poetic Dan

                    As should we all! as this is all but a stage my friend, or a skip down the mountain, with leprechaun friends playing the ukulele. Singing hi diddly Dee this is not the life for meeeeee..

                    Already inspired me hehe 😉

                    • willyweed

                      Oh good well then get busy and write on! Tally ho and all that jazz! ww

                      • Poetic Dan

                        That I just did, one that's been stuck in there for a while.
                        I knew the title but nothing else, I look forward to going back over it tomorrow. Tally ho, chap



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