the rhythm does now keep a flowing
from my heart i'll keep on rowing
pulling these oars
with all my might
what i find now is a brightening sight
turning this way
with a yearning for that
learning to sway
telling one thought to scat
its a pretty good night one could think
as long as by right my ship dont sink
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onepauly (
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- Comment from author about the poem: meditation at night
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Good write. May your ship sail on forever.
Don't know why, but your excellent poem conjured up a dream-like feeling. As usual, Pauly, good work!
I hope it brought joy
You are really good Pauly. Keep the flow coming. Don't let it sink.
I hope it made you smile.
But you stay afloat and here you are! Something about night puts us in reflective moods.
reflection is a very good word!
very often we are pulled down by the under current of our lives. normally we pop back up and start all over and remember your not on your own.
thank you kevin, your all heart. where would I be if it were not for you reading my poems.
I'm not too sure but keep writing regardless. I always read what you write. I may not be the best in commenting but am always there.
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