Control

Renzi

 

It's extemely hard to elucidate my complex reality

I

Am

So

Controlled

By

Myself 

That

Can't

Control 

Me

  • Author: Renzi Mars (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 20th, 2017 05:28
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 38
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Comments4

  • Louis Gibbs

    Your mind is so creative it's scary. It is interesting to me that creativity is often accompanied by a personal challenge of one kind or another, like your eating disorder and my Asperger's syndrome. Einstein had his own demons, as did many other creative geniuses. At any rate, I'm very glad to be a recipient of your gift of expression, Renzi.

  • Goldfinch60

    You have started with word control so just spread it to the rest of you. Good write.

  • malubotelho

    Hey Renzi, this is awesome. You can control you cause you can control words. If you can not control you just let it be.

  • FredPeyer

    Magic writing Renzi. Your 'me' is controlled by your 'self'. So now which one do you want to change? If you change the 'self', the 'me' is not controlled anymore and if you change the 'me', your 'self' has nothing to control. 🙂



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