Dancing in the dark
where I had lost my heart
in late June that came too soon
while the old pale moon
lost its shine another time,
So, this will be the story of me
where I write my letters
for the world to see and read
all about what my heart bleeds.
Poetic Judy Emery
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Poetic Judy Emery (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I written this poem because it has my heart in it, My life wasn't very kind and late June always seemed to make me cry because of painful times that happened in my life . So I called it Dancing in the rain.
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WELCOME JUDY ~ Thanks for your picture (lovely) and your first Poem (intriguing). It is full of rhythm and adequate rhyme ~ elegant ! The subject is enigmatic ~ You promise us letters ~ which I hope will be subsequent Poems that you share with us ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
Beautiful. This has a lot od heart and meaning to it
Beautiful. This has a lot od heart and meaning to it
Beautiful. Well written
Judy, such a beautifully crafted introductory piece from you. A really pleasant surprise. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Hard to believe this wonderful piece is the beginning. Can't wait for more!
Great introductory piece! Can’t wait to read more from you. Thanks for sharing
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