The tears begun to fill my eyes and the warmth of it reminded me of the sun rising and casting it warm light to the earth.
I then had thoughts of desire of flying high. To catch the sun and surround it with stretched arms. I asked God if I could fly. By all mistakes being made before, God broke my wings, so I could not fly to hell.
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HELL IS NOT WHAT WE ARE AIMING FOR
Definitely not. This is why God broke my wings.
you don't need wings to fly malu. ive done it and I don't have wings. it has something to do with gravity.
Yes, you are right. I can fly without wings if I'm meditating or on lucid dreams.
yeah, dreams were what I meant with that. in my dreams It was like, I could levitate about four inches from the ground. I would tell the people in the dream. I am asleep this is a dream I'm in right now, watch what I can do. then I would levitate , there was nothing under my feet. it does"nt happen anymore. but I know its there somewhere.
The exoteric people says that when one see oneself flying on dreams it means you are looking into enlightment. The thing is to keep on the right path. I believe that just watching yourself about the ego and keeping a pure heart is all we need. Thanks for sharing your dream with me.
I like that word exoteric, I'm going to look it up. in the dictionary. but there is one thing I would like to bring up, you said ego is some number of sins. I looked up the word and as a definition it states, excessive self-opinion. I know sometimes the same word has more definitions then one, maybe this is happening here. I don't doubt your definition, you could do us both a favor and look for ego in a dictionary. if you would do that I would be pleased. and I would like your results. because I'm curious. and my heart is far from being pure. I have heartbreak and regret. also I take high blood pressure medication. you've made my day, thanks.
PSYCHOANALYSIS
the part of the mind that mediates between the conscious and the unconscious and is responsible for reality testing and a sense of personal identity.
PHILOSOPHY
(in metaphysics) a conscious thinking subject.
Here are the two definitions. Look the second that is about metaphysics
In spirituality as in ecsotetism they teach that the ego is a conjunction of defects or phantoms that actuate on our mind taking our energy and making us act in the way they want us to. This is why I told you to get the book from Eckhart Tolle because he can explain about the ego perfectly. The power of now is the name of the book.
Good writing Malu, as usual, but the ending surprised me. I thought you wanted to fly high, but for hell you have to go the other way.
Sorry, I should had writing an explanation to it. That is; one day I was sad and thought to myself I should leave everything behind and go live somewhere else. I went outside to see the sun and begun to cry. So I wrote half of this poem. The next day I went to work and I fell and broke my arm. Then I could not go nowhere. It came to my mind that it might be God not letting me go because I would suffer a lot if I've had gone. So I wrote the rest of the poem.
Thanks for the explanation. Now it makes more sense.
I know it. This seems crazy but it is not. Thanks for reading Fred
I suppose i feel this poem in a metaphorical sense in the very least.
The wings will come in time.
Great poem!
Thank you. Thanks for reading and commenting. And yes, it is metaphorical.
I am so happy that you cant fly to hell because Heaven is your home along side all of Gods beautiful people. you are one of those beautiful people and a beautiful poetic writer also x
Thank you so much Kevin. This is not new writing. Just found it on my notes.
Thanks Robert. I think anything that makes us suffer is hell. This is why I was grateful somehow that I had that little accident that broke my arm, other ways I would had committed a big mistake.
I see the wings being used here metaphorically in this great message - nice one Malu.
Thank you Michael. I appreciate you reading and commenting. The responses always bring me the idea of having more responsibility with my writings.
We need reminders like this for at times we would all want things not so good for our future - a fine piece of imagery which set many thinking including myself - - thank you for sharing your experience dear Malu and I hope that broken arm is healing too.
Thanks Fay. Yes, sometimes we get desperate thinking a big change is what we need but I believe that in my case having that gap on my life, having to accept the fate of an accident that made me stop and think was the best for me. Hard for others to understand. Thank you always for reading and commenting. You are such a talent with your writings.
I read in your response to FredPeyer about the circumstance of this pieces origins. Maybe god was telling you he wanted you to continue your path in your present location. Sometimes it difficult to believe there is a 'hell' anyway.
Thanks B/A. Yes, I understood this way. Sometimes the answers for your questions are only a feel days ahead but we have no patience to wait for them to come. That was a great lesson for me.
I believe everything happens for a reason, your wee poem is a great example of that ♡
Thanks Renzi. It is funny how your life turns around. Thanks for reading.
Thanks Jane. The first part were written one day and then the next day I had the accident and wrote the other part. It is a sequencial thought.
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