i hate you dad
more than before coz
you weren't there
and for that i hate you more
met in february
it was going okay
you had a game
that i didnt want to play
you broke my heart
and broke my soul
and now theres nothing left
but a big black hole
where my heart used to be
cause you fucking ripped it apart
you told me to die and called me names
you stupid old fart
and i hate you dad
16 years you were gone
always blamed my mother
told her she never belonged
youre a drunken bastard
and a complete fool
and i hate you so
stop using me like im a fucking tool
im out your life now
done and fucking dusted
whats another 16 years eh?
face it "dad" you got busted!!!
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NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel... (
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- Comment from author about the poem: he wasnt there for the first 16 years of my life i only knew him for 5 months and hes torn my whole world apart
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Comments6
well expressed but a sad situation
Well you seem like amazing person and a wonderful poet, he doesn't deserve to know you x
Rachel, as a dad I feel for you, feel your hurt and your anger. You write so well, the feelings practically leap off the page. From your writing I perceive you as a strong and smart woman. I know it sounds cliche, easy to say, maybe unnecessary, but sometimes there is nothing else we can do but to forgive, forget, and move on. Otherwise the hatred and hurt will destroy your own life. I do hope you will have good people come into your life to give you love and understanding.
its just the betrayal ad hurt he caused me
Rachel, I so totally agree with Fred! Easy for me to say as I had my Dad. However, I still spent many years 'hating' him because of his strictness and lacking show of love - because I loved him so much. They're too sides of the same coin. I carried the feeling with me for many years until I realised that I was holding myself back and was the only one destroying my life through bitterness. Be annoyed with him not being there, but look beyond that and how you've got through and become such a wonderful and talented person without him. I believe that you are strong enough to let it go and make a great life for yourself.
my dad left when i was a baby and ive only just got back in touch with him and the fact he betrayed me hurts to much
Very emotional piece! But loved the way you expressed it
Strong stuff and good for you too! You are obviously worth better, much better. There's a blessing in this though - you haven't had to grow up with an ogre of a father ruining your every day. So hey-ho could have been worse. Smile and think about tomorrow. Good writing by the way. (afterthought, i left home age 15 because of misery, its told in some of my stuff published earlier this month, mssg me if you'd like to know which pieces).
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