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sometimes one day is like the next

you can probably feel it in the text

those machines you use with your hands

traveling the world those distant lands

from one to others astral bodies connect

coming together they select

which is for one and which is for all

not confused but on the ball

stories narrated for and from

these people looking for a little fun

bored emptiness now filled with life

with cyberspace they end their strife

interested in what they might find

someplace somewhere the people are kind

the views about truths they will face

knowing what to do just in case

to share each others intellect

and to place that cause into effect

 

  • Author: onepauly (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 27th, 2017 04:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: see for yourself
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  • kevin browne

    'and to place that cause into effect' means that you have to keep writing and never give up. when is the next poem ready?

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    • kevin browne

      'and to place that cause into effect' means that you have to keep writing and never give up. when is the next poem ready?

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      • Fay Slimm.

        A triumph of rhyme contained in this tribute to forum and what it achieves. Good reflections here Paul.

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        • Louis Gibbs

          It is truly a new, connected world with these brilliant devices all seem to carry and communicate with. Where it might lead and impact our reality will be fascinating to watch. I enjoyed this fine poem, onepauly!

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          • Goldfinch60

            Good write, we are all out there.

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            • malubotelho

              Wow Pauly. You nailed it. Such an awesome poem. Like you said; if one wants to do a better job writing, one need to perfect it. You did it. Thank you.

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              • WL Schuett

                Thanks Paul I will try to fit in

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