beautiful , soft notes soar the air as your fingers gently trace the keys
exactly like the professionals , playing with such passion & so at ease
i can tell that it's not your first time , you have played this song before
strong musical sensations destined to make a person crave for more
never missing a note as you create the perfect harmony
i am ready to learn a thing or two , if you are ready to teach me
during this session , we will become one & let our energies collide
take my hands , be my guide , feel the music , & share our vibes
as the vibes get stronger , the room begins to change
the music comes to an end with nothing being the same
i have now entered a new state of mind , a place so blissful & heavenly
a place i can continue to come to , just as long as you agree to come with me
we finished the melody , ending with vibes so calm & sweet
but there are more sessions to come & there are more things to teach
get ready for session two , session one is complete
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SincerelyA (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Love
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A well done sensual metaphor, C.M.! I really enjoyed it. Thank you, and welcome to MPS!
Thank you for the feedback and thank you for the nice welcoming also!
Welcome to MPS CHERISH (Beautiful Name for a lovely Lady !) Loved the love and sensuality in your first poem ! "When you are in love the Whole World sing a Melody" perhaps "Air on a G~string ?" Thanks for caring and sharing ~ more poems please ! This is a very empathetic site so you should get some more nice responses ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thank you for the kind response and warm welcome! I will surely post more poems.
Lovely, lovely...did I detect some heat? Nicely executed, CM. Warm welcome!
Heat indeed detected! Thank you for the response & warm welcome!
Really nice yeah this is a blaze of intensity nice flow.
thank you!
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