I've always felt like my head was spinning
Then I met you and this new beginning
Now just with one sound (pisu)
Endless amounts of peace
Passes from your lips to my ear
Calming the stormy cyclone Insider
For words will never be enough
To let you know all my love
So I'll sing and dance
making it up as I go
For you showed me my key
That opened my flow
That's something I'll never let go
I promise to try and return it to you
I'd gladly spend the rest of my days
Making sure I do!
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was something I did the other day to let my amazing lady know that in nearly 2 years of being together, it feels like a life time but yet brand new. Never stop looking for the right puzzle piece to fit with you. One more note is that we don't say I love you that much and even though I now know it in Portuguese, its still not as fantastic to just make one noise that only we know has an abundance of meaning to it.
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Comments5
Wonderful loving write. I am sure that your heaven will always be there.
It is the reality I am creating my friend.
A wonderful verse of assurance for some lucky lady - such a delight to read.Dan - - keep that romantic ink flowing my friend.
Thank you, it's something I'll never loose 😉
a bit of classy poetry. nice work.
Jack of all, master of none!
Thanks Dan for this beautiful way of saying 'I love you'!
Credit to my Portugal queen for inspiring me. My words are only as good as the people I know!
Glad you liked it too
Inspired and loving piece, dear Dan.
Thank you, may we all find what we are looking for
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