There's a path I take each and every week

That reminds me of something, so to speak 

When my head's in the shed and I feel like I can't cope

I look up and see that little wall of hope

  • Author: Renzi Mars (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 2nd, 2017 06:04
  • Comment from author about the poem: After therapy each week i get my bus home at this wee wall. There is always hope right?
  • Category: Short story
  • Views: 49


  • Louis Gibbs

    Your strength shines through in this fine offering, Renzi. Keep your mind focused on that timely wall of hope as you heal.

  • UniquelyMel48

    I tell myself this everyday . For without hope why is left. Keep hoping . Lovely poem

  • Goldfinch60

    So very true, hope is always there for you, for me for us all.

  • FredPeyer

    Hope is like the sun, which, as we journey toward it, casts the shadow of our burden behind us.
    Samuel Smiles

    Yes, Renzi, there is always hope, but hope is not enough, it needs to be followed by positive thinking and action!
    I JUST KNOW that better feelings, happiness and health are just around the corner. All you have to do is trust, believe, and go there!

  • Christina8

    Very nice poem. Just keep your head up and remember you always have hope. Thanks for sharing this piece. Hugs!

  • Mugsdaddy

    Beautiful write it felt very personal and true. Thanks for the glimpse of hope.

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