One blink you were gone
I hate how you left me to mourn
I think about you sunset to dawn
You were there the very first moment I was born.
When you left I felt alone
I'm sorry for all the caohs and every little moan
I wish I can pick up the phone to tell you what's going on,how much I love you and I'll always think of you no matter how much I've grown.
The next time I see you I wanna hold you tight and not let go, I think of you every night your just a image in my head before I go to bed.
When you took your last breathe I wanted to take mine to because i knew you weren't gonna be there when I say I do.
Throwback to the peek a boos and I love yous you were there all the years I'm grateful we had.
So nan if you can hear me from way up high just know this isn't our last goodbye.
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Author:
demi (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem when my nan died and I feel like I'm closer to her when I write please leave a like and a comment ❤️
- Category: Sad
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A lovely tribute to your Nan, demi! I'm sure she appreciates it. Welcome to MPS!
thanks x
WELCOME DEMI Thanks for your first poem ! Love the Structure it is bursting with rhyme & rhythm like a good poem should. The Subject while sad paints a lovely picture of a NAN you loved and enjoyed ! Also there is a Faith & Hope in your heart that one day you will be reunited in Heaven ~ AMEN. We can all empathise with you DEMI ~ because most of us have experienced the loss of a loved one in the Family and Friends. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ MPS is a very caring site ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
thank you means alotx
That was incredible. It gave me goosebumps, the line with the "I do." You are very talented.
thank you x
You're welcome..
I read that poem from my kids' perspective. Broke my heart.
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