Darker than any night, mountains of black fall from your shoulders.
Your visit uninvited, and yet I am here, close to your belly.
Listening to the hum of your heart.
Dream totem I am yours this evening, riding the waves of the unconscious.
Your reach is firm but soft. Your gaze sharp and luminous.
My breath slows.
I am silent, waiting for your message.
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Night Owl (
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Very good night owl! "Your reach was firm but soft, gaze sharp and luminous!!! I love those lines the most.🦋Take care!
TY Adri ~:)
Beautiful language night owl, like 'riding the waves of the unconscious'
Welcome to MPS, I would like to read more from you.
TY Fred~ A lifetime of words floating around this head of mine ~:)
Wow! Love this. "My breath slows." In thst line can feel the state of relaxing the body and mind and soul to open oneself to whatever message might be awaiting us. I can feel the eagerness to receive a message, but also a sort of acceptance of whatever message might come. Complete openness. Love this poem a lot. Beautiful, engaging and though-provoking write!
TY Trlangle for your kind words ~ This poem was inspired from a dream I had - A powerful panther paid me a visit... ~:) Love hearing your insights...
Good write, may your dream totem always be with you. Welcome to MPS.
TY Goldfinch ~ Nice to meet you and everyone here...
Dreams can have powerful messages. Hope it's the message you need. Great write.
YES! TY AP!
Thank you Santita- You're so kind... I love your word play and imagery as well...
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