I see the world is happy,
but,in this world,I am not happy!
I see,life is an ongoing journey-
but this journey of my life wants to halt!
I know,when you are in love heart beats at its best
but my heart wants to rest..
Everyday,I see a ray of shine!
but when will my hope shine
I know-it breaks you,hurts you,
but this is what love gives you..
You either accept or quit,
In the end,you are gonna get hit
So,stand,gather the courage to deal with it..
This is life,so you better face it...
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Author:
SMD (
Offline) - Published: August 5th, 2017 12:54
- Comment from author about the poem: I am new to this forum,pardon me if you don't like it,I just jotted down my feelings.
- Category: Sad
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Welcome! If this is your starting-point, then it's a good one. Great expression.
thanks!
Welcome SMD ~ thanks for your first poem which examines a perennial question ~ What is love ? ~ How do we cope with it ? It starts @ 16 (or earlier ~ I'm twice that now) and we fall in and out of Love ~ My philosophy (being a Man) is better to have loved and lost ~ than never to have loved at all ! I have learned something from all my M / F relationships ! I have been hurt but not mortally and I am much wiser now ! I have a steady GF (29) but we live separately OK. Thanks for sharing ~ good poem ~ more please. Blessings for the future ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
thank you for the encouraging words!
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