I loved you like wild horses
unbounded sand and ocean endless
throbbing chests and ragged breath
our feet danced with the sunsets
beating in our veins
I loved you like wild horses
we drank when we were thirsty
we cried when we were broken
and knew when we were hungry
we would always have the night
I loved you like wild horses
unfettered moon-winds blew
their sepia across our beaches
antiquing our days, I rode your waves
and frothed beneath the stars
I loved you like wild horses
I said I loved you wild
and never asked for freedom
never, ever asked you
to be free
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Author:
Heather T (
Offline) - Published: August 7th, 2017 12:06
- Comment from author about the poem: I\\\'ve been gone a few days and have to realign with my muse. Here\\\'s an older offering until she whispers in my ear again.
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Comments9
Very lovely. Like how the words flow.
Many thanks, WBL! Glad you found something to enjoy here. 😊
"knew when we were hungry we would always have the night" ... beautiful and sensual! Love it! Welcome back, Heather.
Thank you for kind comments and the welcome, dear Louis! I'm so behind now!
Gentle erotica slides from your pen like nectared silk in this piece of romantic wizardry Heather - loved every stanza and the one-line repetition added more force to the wild feel of the verse. So pleased to have caught this gorgeous offering my friend.
I love seeing your face appear on my offerings, dear Fay. Thank you for your kind appraisal 🌹
Damn it Candle stole my favorite stanza
(Shakes fist like old man) lol
If this is an old write it shimmers like tomorrow's sunrise
Nice one really really nice
Thank you, my friend! She's known for witchery, ya know. Always appreciate you many muches *hugs*
Good poem I could feel your passion
Thank you for reading and commenting!
Very beautiful love poem. My favorites. Gracious writing.
Thank you, sweet Malu! I enjoy your visits!
Good write, may your wild horses always gallop with your love.
Oh I hope so, GF. Thank you!
Oh, wow.. Wild Horses. They truly are amazing! I've seen them in Western United States and they do run wild.. Oh, so carefree and beautiful, just like your write. Thanks ever so much!!!
I appreciate you! We have wild Spanish mustangs here on the NC Outer Banks. They are a spectacle to see running on the beaches.
very beautiful and ever so lovely piece of writing .. the beat to this piece is great !
Thank you for reading me! Appreciate the look back at an older piece.
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