He laid her down, her arms dropped alongside her body.
He got on his knees and begun to trace her naked skin with his finger, carefully touching as if afraid of she being awake.
As he blew on her face the moviment of her hair thrilled him.
He felt immense pleasure cupping her lips with his hand. He went down between her breasts and stopped at her navel.
He stood there paying attention.
How much would cost to touch each one of her breasts.
He lifted his head as the three came in scene. They begin to discuss which one would stay with her mouth.
He traced down and went to her legs. He thought how silly she was running from them. She could just give herself up. Less pain.
He run his finger up her thighs and cried burying his face on the golden furry triangle.
He then shouted to them; I will keep this part as she is a virgin and can not be deflowered.
They sat there and prayed for remission.
Later on, they got the knife and begun to cut.
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Author:
Malu (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 7th, 2017 13:22
- Comment from author about the poem: This was written in honor of our friend (Candlewitch) and her male alter ego (Eddystix)
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WOW MALU ~ This is some POEM ! We can't blame all our actions on EDDY. Your very sensuous Poem / Photo combo (you can't have one without the other !) starts gently enough "He laid her down ................ " but it ends in HORROR (thanks for scaring !). Dissection & dismembering of a Lady is "ultimate sex" but it happens. Thanks for having the guts to share ~ it will give me nightmares ~ but I felt (having read & reread it) that i was brave enough to comment. There is more than a hint of NECROPHILIA ! Thanks for sharing ~ I still Love You ~ BRIAN XOX
Thanks for reading. You see where our imagination can go when teased. Don't be scared 😳 I love you too.
Thanks Santita. It is quite scary to write dark murderous things but I wanted to try. My Stephen King side.
Damn, wow Malu wow I had to read twice to get the gist
Nice interweaving of psyche mesmerizing
Thanks for reading. Not my style though. Now I will have to clean myself with tons of love poem.
Freaky, Malu! I can only imagine Eddy's twisted grin upon reading this!
Wow! Never thought about that. He will want to be part of the gang. Thanks for reading
Yikes pulled me in then wow didn't know what to think .. good one
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