Flesh betrays the flesh
Mind becomes absent within
Redemption denied
- Author: Simple-Man87 ( Offline)
- Published: August 8th, 2017 09:30
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 30
Flesh betrays the flesh
Mind becomes absent within
Redemption denied
Comments3
Thank you guys. Trying to summarise my life in as few words as possible. Lol
Very powerful in such a short write. Great job
Hey... Thank you Tony.
Welcome
Very good, strong write.
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