The phone is ring
On the screen,
Your number is appearing
I am so exciting
Then, I become hesitating
The quarrel we had last week,
Still felt fresh.
The words you said,
Still lingering in my mind.
Shall I forgive you
Shall I punish you
The ring still going
I hit the listening
"Sorry, I miss you"
"Miss you too"
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Author:
myself and me (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The power of "miss you".
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Comments6
Very heartfelt. Nice write.
Relationship is so subtle, and complicated to understand. Thank you.
First you have to master life. If you can do that, relationships are a breeze
Life, I can only live and follow, I do not have the power to master, not yet. Therefore, relationship is always something hard for me to handle.
Maybe try blazing your own path and lead the followers.
Good emotive write.
Thanks.
It is terrible to fight. I try not to get into any arguements. But, sometimes it is unavoidable, due to hurt feelings and such. Very great job on this.
Nice poem makes me want to read more of your work !
Thanks. I will do my best.
Good poem, mam. As far as I am concerned there are three things to say to keep the peace: Your "I miss you", "I am sorry", and "yes, dear"! 🙂
Thank you for the tip. I will remember" Yes, dear!"
This is real old, but still seems true: Happy wife, happy life! 🙂
my guess is that this was written after the event .. when a period of reflection had taken place but when emotions were still kinda brittle ........ N
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