What beauty, charm and all allure exude,
The Pinoy woman's pinched lips do allude,
A baby tightly held, love's wellspring flows.
A playful slap, quick pinch, play swirl delight
That baby girl she holds; pursed lips, eyes bright
Soft powdered skin and feet exposed, joy flows.
For husband, son, and best friend too delight,
Her focus shifts with hugs, pressed lips, new might
Of love displayed unknown, now known, new flows.
One's culture may express or dictate how
Love is to be expressed or given now.
Love is parched lips, an opened side, Blood flows.
- Gary Edward Geraci
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Author:
Gary Edward Geraci (
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- Comment from author about the poem: My muse is Alfred Lord Tennyson and Vivien's Song written in four stanzas of iambic pentameter, three lines each: aar, bbr, bbr, ccr. The last word in each stanza repeats (r) as does the last word in the first line of the second and third stanzas. I've desired for a while now to write about a quality I discovered in my wife's culture. My wife, a native Filipino (Philippines), and other Filipinas (Filipino women), tend to physically clamp their lips together when publicly expressing affection or love for another; especially for babies. I had never experienced this intensity of love prior to meeting my wife and becoming familiar with her culture. In both my interactions with other Filipinos and my travels to the Philippines, I have witnesssed this expression on numerous occasions. A new way to "feel love" I think; certainly a new dimension of love that I had never witnesses before. Of course, the ultimate expression of love originates from the time our Lord and Savior became man and died on the cross - when we were unloving, full of sin, and ungrateful. There is no higher expression of love than this.
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Comments4
Coupled with your comments this is a most moving poem. My own wife comes from Burma so I have a lot in common with you in encompassing new cultures although not the pursed lips as an expression of love which you describe here. A lovely write which I so much enjoyed reading.
Thank you Michael for your read and comment.
Gary, it is not easy to write a poem following strict rules, but you succeeded admirably.
My wife is Chinese and I think for the Chinese love goes through the stomach, since cooking is an act of love.
Thank you Fred - I share your fortune on the love/food expression as well!
Well done Gary. Very well done.
Thank you AP!
You're very welcome Gary. I look forward to reading more from you.
How wonderful to learn how pursed lips express deep emotion in the Philippine culture with the feeling of love - - really enjoyed the read Gary. and thank you for sharing this loving dimension.
Thank you Fay for your read and comment!
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