I am the girl.
I am the girl who is misunderstood.
I am the girl who is pushed away into the depths of her anger and depression.
I am the girl who has no dad.
Im the girl who's mom is owned by a drug addiction.
I am the girl who's parents don't care about her well-being.
I am the girl who constantly hides away from the world because she's scared of not being accepted for who she is.
I am the girl who is ashamed of her passed, present, and future.
I am the girl who is "poor".
I am the girl who has no friends.
I am the girl who tried to end my life for "attention".
I am the girl who YOUR words affect.
I am the girl who is now known as a "slut".
Yet I am also the girl who is a virgin.
I am the girl who should have ended my life.
I am the girl.
- Author: CSS20013 ( Offline)
- Published: August 13th, 2017 19:53
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is me. This poem is who I am...
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And you are the girl who is a poet. A touching, well expressed first poem on the site CSS! Welcome to MPS! Keep them coming.
Thank you so much. I put my heart and soul into poetry and this is who I am. This encourages me to dig deeper into my creativity and jumble together more poetry so for that thank you once again!
You are quite welcome.
Welcome to the wonderful world of MPS, CSS.
This poem is well written, honest, full of emotion. The repetition of "I am the girl" is well chosen and helps to drive home the points made. There is only one thing wrong with it, it is the second to last line. I don't know how old you are, and it does not matter, anybody who can write like you do has a lot to give. There is sadness in your poem, but there is also beauty (yours), honesty, and strength. Well done, I would like to read more of your work.
Thank you so much! i love receiving input for those that are around me. Thank you for encouraging me to move forward. The times are hard as of right now, but they will get better and poetry helps me to move forward. Once again thank you for your input! Ill be sure to work on another poem!!
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