Will not give up

Poetic Dan

I'm not living a dream life
I'm living a life that makes dreams

I've not got the worlds best kids
I've got kids that make the world better

I'm not with the lady of my dreams
I'm with a woman that let's me dream

I've not got the answer or know it all
I've made mistakes and try to learn

As I sit again writing to figure it all out
Nothing is clear but I just can't give up


 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 15th, 2017 12:18
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • FredPeyer

    Very well said PD! Never give up!

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you buddy

    • myself and me

      " I'm with a woman that let's me dream "
      Have such a lady in your life should be more than enough.
      Nice poem.

      • Poetic Dan

        That it is! Thank you

      • Goldfinch60

        Very good positive write, we must all keep trying.

        • Poetic Dan

          Positive all the way my friend



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