Anticipation
Participation denied
Alone once again
-
Author:
Simple-Man87 (
Offline) - Published: August 17th, 2017 08:10
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 39
- Users favorite of this poem: alisha
Anticipation
Participation denied
Alone once again
Offline)
Comments7
Top notch S-M.
Thank you guys.
I hated that feeling back in school when I wasn't picked for the gleeful ball game. Well said.
Nicholas, I know the feeling.
We miss out on chances we don't take.
A fine Haiku S-M. That's all the 5 syllables of the first line used up in one word!
Thank you orchidee..
Lesson learned... anticipation breeds expectation, expectation leads to failure.
A long story, briefly but well told!
Oh, not a failure. I'm just stunned by words used that are, say, 4 syllables or more. It's educational on 'ere ya know! lol. In fact, the second line is almost one word too. Nothing wrong with any of the lines!
Orchidee, I was referring to the incident that prompted this Haiku. Thank you though. You're far too kind. I appreciate it.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.