Time come
Time pass
Carve trace
On your heart
- Author: myself and me ( Offline)
- Published: August 18th, 2017 14:28
- Comment from author about the poem: This comes to my mind when I am sitting in an empty room.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 36
Time come
Time pass
Carve trace
On your heart
Comments4
Lovely little piece but what are you sitting on if the room is empty?
Floor, my friend.
Ah - now I can go to bed.
Good night. Sleep tight.
A room is not empty while you and your thoughts are in it. Beautiful write m&m.
Thank you. Now the room felt cozy and warm.
Thoughtful, I like the empty room explanation
Thanks. Seems I shall write one about the empty room.
there is something very nice about these few words, almost zen like .. N
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