Trace of Time

myself and me

Time come

Time pass

Carve trace

On your heart

  • Author: myself and me (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 18th, 2017 14:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: This comes to my mind when I am sitting in an empty room.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 36
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  • Michael Edwards

    Lovely little piece but what are you sitting on if the room is empty?

  • Accidental Poet

    A room is not empty while you and your thoughts are in it. Beautiful write m&m.

    • myself and me

      Thank you. Now the room felt cozy and warm.

    • WL Schuett

      Thoughtful, I like the empty room explanation

      • myself and me

        Thanks. Seems I shall write one about the empty room.

      • Neville



        there is something very nice about these few words, almost zen like .. N



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