The memories haunt me
Dreaming or not
It still as much of a burden
The memories taunt me
Telling me things no one knows
Whispering secrets in my ears
All for me to hear
So no matter if I'm broken
Ill put myself back together
Yes I hurt
I hurt more than you may know
But I shall not let that stop me
Shall not stop me from victory
Shall not stop me from loving
And most importantly
Shall not stop me from living
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Author:
Estrella Torres (
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HOLA ESTRELLA ~ Welcome to MPS and thanks for your first poem. It is elegantly written and spaced. The subject is something we can all share ~ at some level ! W are all stunted and hurt by MEMORIES & SECRETS from the PAST. I love the resolve in your final quatrain ! NOTHING is going to stop you from VICTORY ~ LOVE ~ LIFE ~ AMEN ! Gracias for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thank you so much
Estrella, you poem does display resolve to keep on having victory and loving. I enjoyed reading your poem. Excellent write. Welcome to MPS. Roberto
Thank you
Even though it hurt, but you still have the guts to move on. Very strong person indeed. Very encouraging writing.
Thank you
A sad, yet uplifting poem Estrella!
Yes, sometimes it is hard to overcome the past, to stop the memories and to look forward. But your last stanza says it all.
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