Fay Slimm.

Who Dares.


Who Dares.


Hushed and hydrated,

Water-wet otters,

Timorous creatures,

Pretensions dislike.


Hostile approaches,

Beget brave reactions,

Courageous offensives,

Preparing for fight.


Audacious behaviour,

Retribution begins,

Endurance in warfare

Means he who dares

......... WINS ........



  • Nicholas Browning

    This is quite nice. The last stanza gives a nice clean finish. Spot on.

    • Fay Slimm.

      Thank you Nicholas.

    • orchidee

      A fine write again Fay.

    • Lizzy Renee

      NIce write, Fay!

    • Goldfinch60

      Good write. Otters are starting to flourish one more and that is great to see.

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