Electric Youth

Every window in my car is down. The wind is playing with our hair and nips coldly at the tips of our noses.

There is an energy running through our bodies and mingling between our voices.

The sparks in my friends eyes are alive and beautiful.

It feels as if we are electric.


  • orchidee

    A fine write L.

    • Lourdes

      thank you 🙂


      Thanks LOURDES for a beautiful poem about the "JOY of Youth" In my mind I was with you in the car ! Friends we share our youth with can last forever ~ Thanks for sharing ~ love it ! Thanks for being my MPS Friend ~ Yours BRAIN

      • Lourdes

        Thank you again, Brain. 🙂

      • Nicholas Browning

        Friendship has always been a sacred thing to me. I don't have many friends. But I do feel quite happy to be around the people that hold that title. Nice.

        • Lourdes

          Friendship is great and thank you. 🙂

          • Lourdes

            Friendship is great and thank you. 🙂

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