waking from a lusty morning, on a shore with incense burning
you are there
youre always there
in a building scorched and burning I escape clutching my yearning
you are there
youre always there
as a child... I knew your presence, learned your gentle womaness
how you care
always be there
and if I should become a father youre the one i'd hunger after
I'd be there
always be there
woman youre a wonder to me
gentle that just cuts right thru me
temptation simply steals my heart
though you can tear my life apart
a moments tenderness together
holds me thru our stormy weather
though storms we ride in nights on fire
no longer dreams, we're so much higher.
youre my woman, and how I love you,
you are part of me
how I want you, and here together
you move with me
loving living lusting laughing
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dusk arising (
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Welcome to MPS, Dusk. Love your poem, what an entrance!
Thank you for your kind comment FredPeyer.
Just found this and glad I did - great work and welcome to MPS
Your very kind thank you.
Nice job!
Thank you
Wonderful writing here. Smoothing read. Beautiful words. Welcome.
You're very kind, thank you malubotelho.
Your lust fire just burn the sky red.
Spectacular.
AAAh you noticed my lusty sky..... skies like that are amazing and just begging to be made love beneath. Thanks for commenting
Tribute to the women you picture. Very sweet.
Yep, we need them, love them, desire them.... oh i could go on and on. Thanks for commenting.
I enjoyed the diction and syntax in this. As well as the rhyming. Lovely write.
This moved me. A heart warming tribute to woman kind and a true love I hope you hold or soon find, beautifully written
I'm available to the right soul. Thanks again for reading and commenting on my stuff, thats what makes this site so good
Yes its great, I've never shared anything I've written until now, I like the anonymity and security as well as the honesty and respect this space offers.
It was my pleasure! Thanks for showing me 😊
I thoroughly enjoyed this, your first poem published here on My Poetic Side... maybe my visit will encourage even more to follow.. good poetry should be read, and read again... Neville
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